As part of creative writing assignment, I had to imagine a story with the clues given to me..
Read the below outline carefully and write a complete story along with the suitable title..
Outline:
poor little girl - balloon seller - hungry and tired - parents killed in an accident - new year celebrations going on in restaurants and clybs. the girl barely got any food since morning - finally collapsed on the pavement - an old coupld returning from a party - took her home - in the morning, she wakes up to find herself in a big house.
LUCK FOUND
Sara a poor little girl lived in a small old, dirty hut beside a busy street. She was 12 years old and she always were a colorful frock as that was the only dress she had. In the place where she liver there were many healthy cows that used to come there to graze everyday and they also used to give her milk.
She was a balloon seller. She user to sell balloons in a big city and the balloon she sold were as bright as light. There were colorful and attractive but still people rarely used to come so she was very poor.
She had a few friends but otherwise she was very sad. She was sad and lonely at home because her parents did in an accident a few months ago and her relatives lived abroad and did not care for her. They were very rich and selfish.
One day after selling balloons in the evening she felt hungry and tired. So she decided to close the shop early for the day.
After a few days it was New years eve. Sara felt really bad as she could not have a party and could do anything about it. So she went to sell balloons as usual. When it was evening she saw people pass by her wearing great suits and dresses and going for grand parties. There were parties also in clubs and restaurants.
After a few hours as Sara barely got any food from morning she felt dizzy and was about to collapse. Soon she was really very dizzy and she finally collapsed.
Few hours passed by, an old couple returning from a party spotted her and took her to their house. There were very kind and they were also billionaires who retired from a job. They had a grand limousine.
When she woke up she was surprise to find herself in a big house. She, a poor little girl in a big house! She then went to the old couple and introduced herself. She told them about her unfortunate parents, her job and more about her life.
The old couple felt pity for her and asked her to stay with them. She happily agreed and took care of them well. Soon she got a job and because a famous doctor. She soon succeeded in life and was always grateful to those who helped her.
My teacher's comments:
Nice Intro!!
Very imaginative! Keep it up! :-)
Lovely!
